Wednesday 2 January 2013

RUDOLPH - WHITE

THOUGHT BALLOONS
One page of script a week. Each week brings a new character.




(ARTIST NOTE: Black and White Comic)

PAGE LAYOUT

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PANEL 1

Inside a forest where winter snow has fallen, smoke is rising from an unseen disaster behind the thicket of trees. Flames have sprung around the foliage and scraps of metal can be seen on the floor. Emerging from the smoke is RUDOLPH, limping with one eye closed, scars across his body.

CAPTION 1- Over Germany the attack causes an old man and his sleigh to crash into the woods below...

PANEL 2

Further out from the forest and into a clear field blanketed with snow, RUDOLPH is swaying as if about to fall.

CAPTION 1- Only one walks away...

CAPTION 2- But even a legend that once burned so bright...

PANEL 3

Bird’s eye view on RUDOLPH now lying in the snow, dead. The panel is pure white except for the hoof prints RUDOLPH caused and a trickle of blood that accompanies them.

CAPTION 1- Now no longer glows...

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